I’m happy to do that—please paste the article text here (or the portion you want edited). I’ll:
– Mix short and long sentences and vary active/passive voice.
– Replace sentence openings that start with “This” using varied alternatives.
– Swap “Besides that” and “Therefore” with natural transitions like “Then this,” “What’s interesting too,” and “Well, here it is.”
– Vary paragraph openings to avoid repetition.
Optional: tell me your target tone (formal, conversational, neutral) and how bold you want the rewrites to be. If the article is long, we can do it in sections.